[FAQ]

I put a lot of work into the research and content for my videos, but when I look at my analytics, my audience retention graphs always show a big drop-off near the beginning and then a slow decline after that. I suspect my scripting and structure might be the problem.

What are some effective ways to structure a video script specifically to keep viewers engaged from start to finish in 2025? I’m looking for advice on things like how to write a better hook, how to structure the main content to keep it interesting, and how to conclude a video without people clicking away early.

[Jeff Bullas]

Scripting a video with audience retention in mind is one of the most effective ways to improve your channel’s performance. It is not just about what you say, but about how you structure your information to keep a viewer engaged.

There are several key parts to a retention-focused script. First, and most critically, you must craft a powerful hook. You have only a few seconds, typically the first 5 to 15, to convince a viewer that your video is worth their time. Your hook needs to grab their attention immediately. You can do this by clearly stating the value they will receive, by posing an intriguing question that the video will answer, or by presenting a surprising or controversial statement.

Second, immediately after the hook, you should briefly set expectations. You can give a quick summary of the main points you are going to cover. This reassures the viewer that they have clicked on the right video and tells them that the content they are looking for is coming up, which encourages them to keep watching.

Third, you need to deliver the core content in an engaging manner. Instead of just listing facts, try to structure your main points as a story or a series of clear, digestible steps. A very effective technique is to use “open loops,” which means you mention something interesting that you will explain in more detail later in the video. This creates curiosity and gives the viewer a reason to stick around.

Fourth, you must maintain momentum throughout the video. Avoid long, slow, or rambling segments, as these are the points where viewers are most likely to become bored and leave. Keep your energy level up and your language concise. From a production standpoint, it is also important to use visual changes, such as B-roll footage, on-screen text, or graphics, to frequently reset the viewer’s attention.

And fifth, your conclusion should be clear and concise. Summarise the key takeaways of the video very quickly. Do not have a long, drawn-out outro where your energy drops, as this is another common point where viewers will click away before you have had a chance to present your end screen or calls to action. Once you have delivered your summary, you can then ask them to subscribe or direct them to another relevant video.

When writing your script, always read it out loud to ensure it sounds natural and conversational, not like you are reading from a textbook. For many creators, a detailed dot-point outline works better than a word-for-word script to achieve a more authentic delivery. By structuring your videos this way, you are constantly giving the viewer a reason to keep watching.

Cheers,

Jeff

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